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Jul 30, 2008, 9:51:36 PM
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:iconarwing3:
THIS WAS HARD, I haven't done people pict.s much at this point, and I have never drawn women befor, so this is the best I have done with Krystal. This is my first deviation, so tell me if there are problems. LAYTA

(C) Nintnedo
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~unsane-fox Jun 5, 2009  Student Artist
this looks pretty good, i especially like the poses you put them in! nice work, keep it up!

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:iconstaryoshi:
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeellllllllll.....

To be nit picky... *ahem*

(dons satirist cap)

The arms are a little stringy; they need a tad more muscle and depth.

If you have bent knees, they're backs would be a little arched. I've seen no one who stands straight upright when they are bending their knees like these two.

Aaaand... their guns remind me of the Cricket from Men in Black.

Oh, and lastly, Krystal's shoe has a little more bend to it... by this I mean the shoe goes flat to the ground for the toes, then kicks up at an angle (about 60 degrees) after the ball of the foot.

(removes cap)

Don't worry, it wasn't a bad start, but learning what to be picky about makes it all the much better when you draw in the future.

Good picture though, I love the concept =)

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FINALLY, SOMEONE GAVE ME DETAIL, I love it when one gives me a true opinion, it gives me something to look out for in the next pictures, so please, keep doing that for me. As for why the picture looks so wierd, that's because it was the first time I really tried to draw Fox and/or Krystal, let alone a full body. Thanks again.

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Well yeah... I'm really trying to figure out a lot more about my work too.

I can draw many images, but I need to sketch multiple times to get the "exact" specifications.

=S

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*RikMcCloud Aug 5, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful work on the poses. Nice one
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~Marcus0605 Jul 30, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Their hands and guns are little small! But I like the concept on this! Keep it up!

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They are small, aren't they, i'll remeber that next time, thanks.

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(Oh! and my Flickr account is here-->[link] )
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~Marcus0605 Jul 31, 2008  Student Digital Artist
welcome! :D

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